Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and Miss Holland is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 4 December 2019
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Jackson,
ReplyDeleteI like you writing however I am not sure what the purpose of this blog post is? Is it to teach others, get feedback or just share your learning? I think it is to share some learning around smilies, am I right?
If it is could you have said As tall as a giraffe instead of an ant because when I think of ants I think about being very small and tiny.
Nga mihi,
Mark