
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and Miss Holland is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 7 August 2020
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post



Hi Jackson, thank you for sharing your work. You and Max did a great job working together and finishing your church. I love the extra detail you both added in it.
ReplyDeleteI would like for you to next time to add more of a description of what you had to do at the start of your blog post. This will explain to your readers what you had to do and why. Why are the parts of the church so important to us as Catholics?