Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and Miss Holland is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 30 April 2020
Anzac reading Friday
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Hey Jackson,
ReplyDeleteI love how you have explained what has happened and have reflected on what you wrote. I agree with you, they should have prepared their landing better as it may have saved lives.
Thank you for sharing your learning with us! Keep up the great work!
Hi Jackson, what a good explanation about Anzac Day. That is a lot of soldiers who were died. I wonder how they got the wrong landing place?
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