Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and Miss Holland is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 21 April 2020
How to brush your teeth
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Jackson,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on posting your instructions to your blog. I like how you have shown the success criteria as well so we can see that you have assessed your own work.
You have used some great imperative verbs and time connectives but I can't see any adverbs. Do you think you could add some in? Remember an adverb tells you how to do the verb e.g. carefully turn or gently squeeze.
thank you miss holland.
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