Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and Miss Holland is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 22 April 2020
how far the holy spirt can fly
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Jackson, thank you for sharing your learning about the Holy Spirit. I really like how you have explained how they flew and why. I really think you should add a description about why you were doing this. Explain that it was apart of a science experiment and that it was to see how the Holy Spirit would act as wind.
ReplyDeleteWhat did your planes look like?