Once upon a time there was a boy named Jacky Jacky Chan his best skill in his life and
his best accomplishment was learning how to do nunchucks. 20 years later he had a kid
his name was fatty fatty Chan, lots of kids at his school bullied him for his name. One day
he woke up and went to his dad's garage. There was a dusty old box in the corner he opened
it and it was his father's prized nunchucks and a note which said if you are reading this i am dead.
He thought for a second that his dad was going to give him this nunchucks just before he died he had
an idea to go to his school with the nunchucks and then the boys came along and started calling him
fatty fatty chan fatty fatty chan. ´´Donk
his best accomplishment was learning how to do nunchucks. 20 years later he had a kid
his name was fatty fatty Chan, lots of kids at his school bullied him for his name. One day
he woke up and went to his dad's garage. There was a dusty old box in the corner he opened
it and it was his father's prized nunchucks and a note which said if you are reading this i am dead.
He thought for a second that his dad was going to give him this nunchucks just before he died he had
an idea to go to his school with the nunchucks and then the boys came along and started calling him
fatty fatty chan fatty fatty chan. ´´Donk
¨ the boy was knocked out of his misery the teacher
came along and said principal's office now he walked to the principal's office
and saw his dad the principal left the room chan did you take my nunchucks yes said
chan why said jacky because there was this boy that built me every day why did he do
it i don't know he he called me fatty fatty chan sow i knocked him out with the nunchucks so
he would leave me alone ok chan i understand then they lived happily ever after.
came along and said principal's office now he walked to the principal's office
and saw his dad the principal left the room chan did you take my nunchucks yes said
chan why said jacky because there was this boy that built me every day why did he do
it i don't know he he called me fatty fatty chan sow i knocked him out with the nunchucks so
he would leave me alone ok chan i understand then they lived happily ever after.
Hi Jackson, I can't read your writing as it is going off the page. Could you fix it up so I can read it. Thank you!
ReplyDeletei am very sorry i have fixed it now
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! What a great story. I love the title, it grabbed my attention and made me really want to read your story so I am glad the text is fixed. What made you write this story?
DeleteNunchucks are such an interesting object! I love how you have used such detail ... e.g. the boy was knocked out of his misery and dusty old box.
Next time, remember to add capital letters and full stops. This will help us read.
Keep up the great work! I am glad Fatty got a happy ending!